13.5 Stauren and Kimberly

If to be written in the Snapshots structure, the distinction between the characters of Stauren and Kimberly would have to be made clear. As all key events lead to the final scene, these events should be meaningful enough to tell the story in an interesting manner. The violin scene is a big scene that leads to the coffee shop scene, another big scene. The other little scenes in between those two big scenes will add to the depth of the story.