13.7 Carlissa and Italo

This story was imagined in its incomplete movie form. If written as a short story, it would take the form of the Snapshots structure. Key events in this story are when Carlissa, a thirty-year-old woman, looks lustfully at Italo, a young man with a brawny figure who she is determined to marry. A possible problem in writing this story would be its scenes. The story's scenes would have to be more relatable to common viewers, without having to remove heated bits. For that to happen, the characters of Carlissa and Italo would have to be given more importance to.