I would rather tell this story in the Snapshots structure if the focus were to be on important events. These events will highlight the character of Darren who, because of his lack of motivation to study and of his twin brother Paolum's successes, becomes jealous and thinks of messing up with Paolum's life and work. The moment everything comes together is when Paolum catches Darren ruining his project. The story ends here, but the readers are left to decide what happens next.
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